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I am actively looking for critiques
- damian
- by dado
- logo for my own portfolio online. the concept is visual communication. critiques are welcome! :D
- Number of views: 4132
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 04 '07
- Added to Gallery: Jun. 25 '08
Oct. 04 '07
firebrand said:I really enjoy your style, da... sorry, damian. I don't have a problem with the i. There is a slightly dodgy curve, bottom left of the speech bubble.
Oct. 05 '07
HH Web said:Nice! The d looks gorgeous, the text below is a little hard to read though. But just a little!!
Oct. 08 '07
chazthetic said:Solid!
I love it. I also like the color choice as well.
The bottom of the curve of the text bubble is a liiiiiiitle off in my eyes.
Feb. 07 '08
idil said:wicked, I really like how you combined the m and i. definitely a favourite. :)
Jun. 25 '08
XLCowBoy said:Errr...
Why fix it?
Add a nose, and you have a smart face/head, the direction of the "pointer" of the speech bubble effectively acts as a negative neck line, and the white area as a shirt collar.
You would then have a smartly-dressed, male silhouette.
Jun. 26 '08
daleharris said:love the d speechbubble combination. not a fan of the overly kerned 'daman' though. if you name is meant to be read then i would make it readable. ;)
Jun. 26 '08
Respiro said:Dado, the idea of the speech bubble in the "d" is good but I would try different representations of it. I'm not sure that, as it is now, the speech bubble has the most proper architecture.
Sep. 02 '08
RBN said:Hermano mio, nunca está de más reconocer el buen trabajo que ha venido desarrollando.
Así como todo lo que he visto de usted, este logo es una muestra mas de su majestuoso manejo y concepto de diseño. Y claro que tiene que serlo, es lo que lo representa. Go Ahead!!
Sep. 19 '08
jessicacrawford said:While the design feels edgy and cool, the combined "m" and "i" bother me. I agree with kult house - I don't really see the point. It only takes away from the design, not adds. Other then that, I really like overall design.
Oct. 02 '08
LogoDesignWorks said:Nice work. How do I contact you? Your profile does not have a contact point. May be you can buzz me on Skype (spellbrand)?
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Oct. 04 '07
OcularInk said:Woah, I didn't even notice the speech bubble at first. I like this. I'm not too fond of the missing 'i' though. I think this is a trend that will emerge soon (I'm already seeing it more and more), and I feel you might regret that decision later. You know what I mean?