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BlueGiraffee concept art
by Rambler001
proposal for blue giraffee. a giftstore and handicraft.
Number of views: 4040
Dated Submitted: Oct. 04 '07
Added to Gallery: Oct. 05 '07
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Oct. 04 '07

rambal said:

like the mark and color.
tail is having black looks odd.
what abt the head?

logo for what? then only can get the clear picture abt the logo.

Oct. 04 '07

Rambler001 said:

it's made in a sery(?) of four.
There is also one with the body and head but this one looks best for logopond in my opinion.

it's a store selling gifts and handicraft

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Oct. 04 '07

Pau217 said:

I think is a good idea, but it feels incomplete without the head.

Oct. 04 '07

amyblandford said:

I agree it needs a head. Is there a reason that giraffe is spelled wrong? (I don't mean the griaffee in the title.) Is it the name of the store owner or something?

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Oct. 04 '07

rambal said:

The head can go inside the shop and hide it. or inside the window.. some more details required for girafee without head. then only this work will be complete.

Oct. 04 '07

Rambler001 said:

giraffee is the name of the shop, yes.

Let me see if it works better with a head. It's just that on the other giraffe these spots are yellow/orange on a blue giraffe (with head), didn't consider that a head was missing.

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Oct. 05 '07

firebrand said:

I like how the spots create the shape of the giraffe

Oct. 10 '07

julia.dranger said:

why people are saying there's no head? The head is the bigger blue spot on the top, right??? And the little white spot it's always an eye....for me, anyway!

I like it! :)

Oct. 21 '07

elteedesign said:

I like the idea, although I agree that the giraffe needs some tweaking.

Did you consider a different font? This would be a great place to use an ff ligature!

Apr. 02 '08

Rb said:

I think the concept is sound it gets across the idea of the craft shop. the graphic just appears slightly too disjointed and hard to focus the eye on the larger picture. tighten it up and it should give a clear image but will still retain the asthetic of being craft related. Really good idea by the way.

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