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Naked Fish 1
by moverdrive
Designed as an identity for a restaurant specializing in sushi, this treatment was created to feel a little off-kilter and fun at the client's request.
Number of views: 1295
Dated Submitted: Oct. 03 '07
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Oct. 04 '07

firebrand said:

Quite quirky but I'm not sure about the letterspacing.

Oct. 04 '07

priby said:

i agree with firebrand, the spacing seems a bit loose 4 me.

Oct. 04 '07

moverdrive said:

Actually, I thought so too regarding the 'fish', but have left it to this point until I could figure whether it was charmingly loose or really distracting.

So far, not so good via your input. :)

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