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answer the cry 2
by tammyhart
here's another idea, might be a little sad, getting feedback from site owner now
Number of views: 542
Dated Submitted: Oct. 03 '07

Oct. 04 '07

Thomas said:

Nice font treatment even if I think it could be slightly better if it was a little less inclinated. I think e's, c and r need a little more work, especially on transition between "the" and "cry", may be too narrow comparing to the last "y". And what about combinating teardrops and descenders ("n" and "h" on the type), keeping your nice work and the concept of "cry"?

Oct. 08 '07

chazthetic said:

I like the type, I don't like the face.

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