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- Inkwell
- by irishbug
- This company sells original, commercial art illustration from the 1940s-70's.
- Number of views: 3259
- Dated Submitted: Sep. 24 '07
- Added to Gallery: Sep. 24 '07
Sep. 24 '07
chanpion said:Excellent choice of typeface. I can almost see it done manually by hand back in the 70s with each letter a little bit tilted. Maybe you can try that! The simple mark is spot on. This version is the best by far. Good job mate.
Sep. 24 '07
amyblandford said:I like this one the best, but it seems like you could create something more memorable by incorporating an inkwell into the design? Maybe that would look too old fashioned... maybe something that looks more like a splatter from a crowquill pen? so far the graphic isn't enhancing the name.
...It also seems a bit odd for someone to use the name "inkwell" to sell art that only dates back to the 1940s. seems more like an 1800s kind of icon, but I guess that's beside the point.
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Sep. 24 '07
tini1 said:I like this one even better....the color is nice...maybe try a few font variations for inkwell?...good work!