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Baitrix
by Chanpion
Proposed logo for a fishing product business that also produces very life like bait fish. The bait fish mark is also a stylised 'b'.
Number of views: 2914
Dated Submitted: Sep. 22 '07
Added to Gallery: Oct. 08 '07

Sep. 22 '07

Blesseville said:

Very nice one chanpion. The icon goes well with the type.

My only concern would be the tail of X touching the "i". That needs a little more work, I think.

Sep. 22 '07

ryantoyota said:

Very Nice. I love the mark, and I love the type, although I do agree with Blesseville's comment regarding the tail of the x. I also hate the odd space between the r and the i, but I'm not sure if there's anything you can do about that. Those are just minor things though.

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Sep. 22 '07

firebrand said:

A very convincing fish indeed. Had me fooled.

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Sep. 22 '07

tini1 said:

I love the mark, unique, cool......I'd like to see it with an entirely different font (the font seems heavy?)

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Sep. 23 '07

dache said:

The fish looks so sad :^(

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Sep. 23 '07

andersonmarques said:

hehehe great job... but, was say dach, i believe the fish looks so sad...

I believe too why the fish so sad, the people has transformed in your food hehehe...

Nice logo... so beautiful... congratulations!!!

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Sep. 23 '07

tishbite said:

hey Chanp again great logo, I have to agree about the "X". Also the "B" looks like it's less slanted then the rest of the letters...is it the same angle?
The fish is awsome, have you tried it with an open mouth?

Sep. 25 '07

Thomas said:

Congratulations! Very good work but I have to agree with Ryan and Blesseville, the font treatment could be improved. I think if you entirely rebuild the "x" and drop the descender, it may fix the space problem with "r" and "i" and balance your type. I also think the left downer part of the "b" could be improved, transition beetween the vertical stem and the downer bowl seems a little too harsh...

Oct. 08 '07

chazthetic said:

Very nice. I love it

The mark is solid.

I only have a few typographic critiques. 1st: the ascender of the A could be thicker to match the rest of the type.
2nd: the dots of the "i"s are getting lost at this size.

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Oct. 23 '07

clashmore said:

They're holding a Sitepoint contest for their logo right now. Absurd...

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