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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- slipstream advantage
- by geniuslogo
- slipstream concept! business efficiency solution provider company
- Number of views: 614
- Dated Submitted: Sep. 22 '07
Sep. 22 '07
blesseville said:Good one, but it seems to me that there's too much empty space on the right side of the "S".
Sep. 25 '07
Thomas said:Nice work and sorry to agree with Ryan, the external upper right curve of the S is too flat...
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Sep. 22 '07
ryantoyota said:I really like this, although I feel it needs some slight cleanup at the top of the S. Specifically the part where the curve flattens out, yet the outer shape containing the S has a very smooth corner. I think the differing curves conflict with each other. Either smooth the S to match the outer shape, or modify the outer shape to flatten out to a sharp edge like the S. I'm guessing the latter will look better.