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Ambience
by iguana
Design pitch for Romanian interior design firm. Is it good? update:slightly more vibrant, redish color combo.
Number of views: 675
Dated Submitted: Sep. 18 '07

Sep. 19 '07

cjiske said:

I like the abstract look of the inside of the house. I'm not sure about the colouring. It seems a little bit ensurancy or something. The font is nice, maybe you can combine the dot of the 'i' with the mark? Just a suggestion...

Sep. 20 '07

helios said:

I think it's quite an ambiguous mark in that you don't know if the red wall is protruding or receding - maybe this is intentional? I would define the perspective more strongly. Also, the 'i' dot is not bad - just link it to the mark by using pink instead of orange.

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