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Hanadi's Recipes

by AmeenSaqqaf • Uploaded: May. 20 '12
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Description: Logo concept for Hanadi's Recipes, a recipe website. Any helpful critique would be great :)

Status: Work in progress

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: HRmonogramspoonforkrecipes

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samdemastrie said on May. 20 '12

I think those four small dashes are undermining the fork and knife a little bit, because they are so similar. I would suggest a thinner line, possibly dashed that spanned the gap from the two words to the utensils. Good work though.

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 20 '12

I appreciate the critique! I'll start working on it.

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 20 '12

Thanks! And you're right, I've uploaded way too many variations separately. My apologies if it got annoying. I'll group some of them up.

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 21 '12

@ClimaxDesigns Will do :D

I updated the logo. I changed the type, curved the fork's edges to be consistent with the spoon and lastly I changed the four small dashes that were in the gaps to thinner dashed lines in the first variation and to thiner regular lines in the second variation. Let me know what you guys think :).

samdemastrie said on May. 21 '12

I think the thinner, solid line works better. If you're looking for more critique, I think the utensils can be improved. Both are a little rudimentary: the fork looks like a pitchfork, and the spoon is simply a circle and a line. If those can be fixed, it would be greatly improved. It's getting better.

ColinTierney said on May. 21 '12

^ couldn't agree more.

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 22 '12

I agree as well and I appreciate your valuable critique sam. It's really helping a lot! I'll get back to work :D

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 22 '12

I worked on the critique and I'm very happy with the results! The spoon doesn't look like a line with a circle at the end of it anymore and the fork doesn't look like a pitchfork. I improved the spoon and fork handles so they look more utensil like. I kept the previous version for comparison and I added two images that are zoomed in on the utensils' details. Please let me know your thoughts.

samdemastrie said on May. 22 '12

Very nice, congratulations!

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 22 '12

Awesome! I didn't expect this to get featured :D. Thanks a lot sam for helping me refine this logo.

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 22 '12

@ClimaxDesigns Thanks!

rudy hurtado said on May. 22 '12

Hey! can I use this? it has my initials :) RH nice solution.

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 23 '12

You don't need it :P. You have a badass personal mark already!

oliverakos said on May. 24 '12

great!!

AmeenSaqqaf said on May. 24 '12

Thank you :)

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