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promissio 4

by priby • Uploaded: Aug. 23 '07
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Description: with some improvements, let's see which one you like better. the line below the logo shows up on the stationery: business card, letter, and compliment card.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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bigjerk said on Aug. 23 '07

I'd try modifying the p in promisio to be more like the one in the mark...so the bottom of th counter and the stem meet perpendicular....otherwise pretty good....

priby said on Aug. 23 '07

thnx, i've tried that and i thought that it spoiled the rythm of the characters, that's why i've used this way. and what do you think about the full futura version (promissio 3)? which one's better?

DigitalCool said on Aug. 23 '07

The line below the logo is irritating. The rest is great.

ghorsman said on Aug. 24 '07

I think the line underneath adds a little frivolity. Overall, it's light and fun. Me likey.

Thomas said on Aug. 27 '07

Nice improvement!

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