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ewedding

by jessebc • Uploaded: Aug. 14 '07
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Description: Looking for some feedback on this design direction.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: wedding

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OcularInk said on Aug. 14 '07

I like the top version. This makes for a nice type solution.
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ahab said on Aug. 14 '07

Yeah, I agree...the top is the best. Looks good.
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ClimaxDesigns said on Aug. 14 '07

Top one definitely it has a more whimsical feeling to it, the lighter font lends itself to the idea of wedding, which to me says light and happy, and the ribbon is better defined as a ribbon on the top version also.Glad to have you aboard fellow Wii-aholic =)

thomas said on Aug. 15 '07

No contest... First pick is better, lighter and more elegant.
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firebrand said on Aug. 15 '07

No brainer...top one. Nice!!
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jessebc said on Aug. 15 '07

Thanks for the feedback guys. I like the top one better as well. I've had some feedback that the loop in the W might read as an "awareness ribbon", which is not really the intent. Any ideas?
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ClimaxDesigns said on Aug. 15 '07

I did get the pink ribbon breast cancer feel from it when i first looked at it, I don't think the weight changes that though. Thats a tough one. Maybe where the 'g' is there are strings that go off into stylized cans, you know the whole tin can on the bumper, maybe three of them?
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jessebc said on Aug. 15 '07

Interesting idea! I'm going to play with making the W look more like a knot, or at least less like a ribbon, and then I might give that a go.
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shaneg said on Aug. 15 '07

Top one is my favorite. I didn't catch the whole ribbon thing, I was thinking more of the "tie the knot" thing.

iamaaronmartin said on Aug. 15 '07

I thought "tie the knot" immediately as well. I'm not sure I agree with everyone though. I think that the ribbon feels best with the thicker typeface. The ribbon in the W on the top version seems a bit off balance. I have a feeling that the lighter contrast in the top typeface won't translate as well as the bottom face, as obvious a conclusion as that may be. The top face W seems to weigh so much more than the remaining lowercase letters. I hate picking apart the top logo, I'm a big fan of the bottom logo.

mattyv8 said on Aug. 15 '07

hey, funny I was asked to be the designer for ewedding.com last Jan but turned it down, wonder if its the same ewedding? Matt Kelly? Cool stuff though you def are css wp2 fashionable, just a bit too restricted maybe, dont hold back on the flare you have. Let your bullets fly, your one of the few designers that actually grasp the internet.

mrk said on Aug. 18 '07

ah, matt venhuizen?

mdta said on Aug. 25 '07

The top one is the better of the two, but perhaps the first e, needs something, either a flourish, or slightly different treatment

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