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Zeebru

by tabithakristen • Uploaded: Dec. 06 '11
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Description: Personal project. Will have more info soon. :)

Status: Work in progress

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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dotflo said on Dec. 06 '11

love the mark!

Dan. said on Dec. 07 '11

i like where this is going...

tabithakristen said on Dec. 07 '11

Thanks dotflo and Dan. I appreciate the feedback :)

oias said on Dec. 14 '11

Very Artistic Like it! I like the Monogram, but i´m not 100% about the other text maybe a bolder type Floated

tabithakristen said on Dec. 14 '11

Thanks oias. I didn't feel like a bold type went well with such a bold mark. I found they were competing rather than complimenting.

oias said on Dec. 15 '11

You´re very welcome @Tab Good Point, form that POV that´s balance (between the types) indeed, still I´m not sure about the zeebru text, maybe a typo with the comic sans feeling, something less formal related with the "Z" style or lowercases (imo).

viiia said on Jan. 17 '12

Cute! There's something quirky and playful about this that catches my attention, makes me ask, "now what's this about?" Have you thought about loosening up the letter spacing on "Zeebru"? It might give you more visual allowance for increasing the typeface weight without it clashing with the logo. Right now you have a nice, compact rectangular unit between the logo and name (think about drawing a shape around it to represent the way it sits in space) but I think if you loosened up the letter spacing, you could transition into a balanced feeling rectangular unit. This might also help you out with the "Zeebru" name not seeming "under-weight" in terms of visual impact. Would like to see where this logo goes in the future :)

viiia said on Jan. 17 '12

sorry, typo, should be: "...but I think if you loosened up the letter spacing, you could transition into a balanced feeling TRIANGULAR unit."

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