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Preserve Housing Development

by martyrologist • Uploaded: Aug. 07 '07
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Description: Logo for a housing development. Wanted to have an illustrated house, and hills to go with the region.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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sandhya said on Aug. 07 '07

This is good, but I thin you can make do without the outline for the type :)

martyrologist said on Aug. 07 '07

Thanks for that. I'm also thinking of dropping the size of "at Clear Creek" a few points.

jrt1223 said on Aug. 07 '07

I like it. I'm just not sure that I would have noticed the hills if you didn't mention them. You may want to think about reworking them. The font matches the illustration style superbly. Nice work man%u2026 or woman (I don't know)

martyrologist said on Aug. 07 '07

jrt1223: First, I'm a guy :) Name's Eddie. Second... Someone else commented to me about the hills. I see what you mean. They need to easily be hills. Thanks
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firebrand said on Aug. 08 '07

Nice illustration but the colours should be more welcoming. The title case gives the illusion that the E is bigger than the P. Hope this helps.

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