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Royal Garden

by Pavel_Kulinsky • Uploaded: Sep. 05 '11
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Description: Updated version (smaller icon and more elegant lines)

Status: Student work

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: kulinskykingroyalleavetree

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contrast8 said on Sep. 06 '11

think it is still too big, but already great concept
:)

pavel_kulinsky said on Sep. 06 '11

:)Maybe maybe, but I think it's normal

hanuman shakti said on Sep. 06 '11

agree...this one is much better :) Love it.

chanpion said on Sep. 07 '11

HUGE improvement with just minor adjustments! Well done.

cnasshan said on Sep. 07 '11

I do agree this is a great leap and it will receive a float, but something about the size still seems a bit 'cartooney' even though it's suppose to be conveying 'royal'. Hate to admit it, but it reminds me of Alice in Wonderland with the Queen's overly large crown. Just my two cents.

cnasshan said on Sep. 07 '11

And please don't get me wrong, I love the direction and mark you've created. I think you're on a solid track here.

pavel_kulinsky said on Sep. 08 '11

Yes I agree with you appenion, It's a little bit cartooney.
But when i tried to make more serious it became noy so good. There was no graphic rhyme and metaphor.

bredlipe said on Sep. 12 '11

great concept!

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