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Pocket Media

by redfour • Uploaded: Jul. 26 '07
Gallerized Apr. '08 4761553a95f6dc85d6c5191fa85f2c11.png
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Description: Logo design for an i-pod/personal audio and accessory website. Colours yet to be finalized.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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punchtank said on Jul. 26 '07

It works for me. Maybe make the "moon" a little thicker? maybe not.

will said on Jul. 26 '07

Very nice! I like the way the ipod jog dial resembles a moon which emphasizes the PM (in a PM - post meridian context).

dragos said on Jul. 27 '07

i love it! it's fluid and smooth.

cruse88 said on Apr. 29 '08

I'm curious as to why the play/pause button isn't on top and the fwd button on the right? Love the mark tho!
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tconrad said on Apr. 29 '08

Cruse88 nice question, i'm curious too. And i'd like to see the right side of the m as smooth as the left. It sort of comes to a harsh point when it arcs over. otherwise nice rendering and negative space.
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redfour said on Apr. 29 '08

Tconrad - you're totally right about the harshness of the m - no idea why it's showing up with an abrupt point as the eps appears fine - I'll check this out, thanks for pointing it out.

BreadMilkandButter said on May. 01 '08

This looks great. I'd like to see what the moon/play button looks like a little darker.
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OcularInk said on May. 01 '08

Clever idea. Definitely can go a little heavier in weight on the moon/crescent shape in my opinion. All in all, nice job.
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AL said on May. 02 '08

What about drawing P as a pocket with M inside?

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