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Existrance Records 2

by Bitencourt • Uploaded: Aug. 04 '11
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Description: Music and Emotion, Trance and Existence. From spain, I'm really enjoying work on it. Need some feedback, fellas. :)

Status: Work in progress

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: songwaveswiredlogotype

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designtofeel said on Aug. 04 '11

This is really cool. I think the brightness of the white is a little overpowering, though. Maybe if it was pink or blue?

bitencourt said on Aug. 04 '11

Hmm, goo point, mate. I will try something else here. Thank you!

yhanktou said on Aug. 04 '11

great e!

bitencourt said on Aug. 04 '11

Updated, take a look! (I think the white one looks better..:/)

designtofeel said on Aug. 04 '11

Yes, better.

bitencourt said on Aug. 04 '11

How about it now?! :D

atomicvibe said on Aug. 04 '11

Compared to your other attempt (the record, which I think you NAILED, BTW), I don't think this one is as strong. However, I feel like you're close. Let me ask you: was this design inspired by glow-stick light trails in the dark? If not, you might want to explore that avenue a bit more. Glow-sticks are an integral part of rave (trance) culture, and this logo attempt could look so much more poignant if it were really executed to look like a light trail in the dark - like this: http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3062/3248996620_e37978ac9b.jpg

Antonio Cappucci said on Aug. 04 '11

Amazing!

rokis said on Aug. 05 '11

The type is sick, nice work Breno!

bitencourt said on Aug. 05 '11

Thank you Antonio and Rokis! :)

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