JELI
by jvogel • Uploaded: Jul. 15 '11
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Jewish Education Leadership Institute. WIP. Feedback always welcome! :)
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I'm not sure the two extra star points add anything. I'd like to see a version with just the star, either where it is or right after the word.
Reply%5E I agree. The arrows feel like they are pointing downward too which would seem counter to the message. Simply removing them and leaving the star perched on top of the %22I%22 might be nice, which would look almost like a sign in some ways, which may have sort of a conceptual metaphor.
ReplyThanks Sam and Sean! Appreciate the feedback and see your points. Posted the two suggested variations. Let me know what you think! Thx again!
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