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Nails Club 2

by alexmark • Uploaded: Jul. 07 '11
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Description: Salon on manicure and a pedicure.

As seen on: none

Status: Unused proposal

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: nail

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13mu said on Jul. 08 '11

cool! & colors & forms)

alexmark said on Jul. 08 '11

spasibo Den)!

ru_ferret said on Jul. 08 '11

I pattern v temy)

alexmark said on Jul. 08 '11

Proboval razniy, etot ponravilcya bolshe vceh!

rblace87 said on Jul. 08 '11

Very cool!

ColinTierney said on Jul. 08 '11

great concept and execution.

LadyGrey said on Jul. 09 '11

Pozdravlyayu, Lesha!

Type08 said on Jul. 09 '11

Partial view of the thumb would help close the upper left blank space and maybe balance it more. Great concept, just my 2 cents.

ru_ferret said on Jul. 09 '11

I think an article and preposition is unnecessary in the tagline, correct me if i'm wrong. Just "Manicure & pedicure salon"?

JF said on Jul. 09 '11

I'd rather see this designed in the designer's native language -- russian -- rather than a poor attempt at translating it into english; sorry to say, the translation did not go well. Design-wise, this is unreadable at smaller sizes, so the words written incorrectly will be hard to read anyway. It's unfortunate.

alexmark said on Jul. 10 '11

Kill me for my bad English))).

JF said on Jul. 10 '11

Alex, I really think you are a talented designer of graphics. You have a great style. But, words matter, and words that represent a logo need to represent them as well as, or better than, the graphic itself.

This is not a personal attack on you, so please do not take it as such. I say this from a general point of view: words matter. Think of it like this: logos here on logopond can only get in if they're type only (words only) or type and graphics. A graphic-only logo doesn't get in. Why? Because it's incomplete. That alone illustrates my point: words are more communicative on their own than a graphic is. Which means improper english is not good for the design, and does not effectively communicate a logo's intent.

I understand this is not a logo that was commissioned by a client -- it's on brandstack at http://brandstack.com/logo-design/details/29679 -- so no harm, no foul. But in my personal opinion, if you'd like to sell this design to someone some day, if you happen to know someone personally who speaks fluent english, have them take a look at work you're translating to english before you post it there. You may have better luck selling it in the future.

I once again, mean this in the most kindest, professional manner possible, and my aim is to help you improve. Please do not be offended.

alexmark said on Jul. 10 '11

I don't take offense at criticism)) it is quite admissible. This sign isn't sold also I don't try to sell it. For me the idea is important, the writing can be corrected! In all the rest the logo seems to me quite %u0437%u0430%u043A%u043E%u043D%u0447%u0435%u043D%u044B%u043C.

alexmark said on Jul. 10 '11

I don't take offense at criticism)) it is quite admissible. This sign isn't sold also I don't try to sell it. For me the idea is important, the writing can be corrected! %u0412%u0440 the rest the logo to me seems to all quite finished.

nathantrafford said on Jul. 10 '11

you could just change it to 'manicures and pedicures'

sbdesign said on Jul. 10 '11

tonko i dushevno)

I-am-tiago said on Jul. 12 '11

Wonderfull!

atomicvibe said on Jul. 14 '11

Great mark! I do agree with the comments about the translation, but otherwise, I love it. Very creative take on the typical salon motifs.

neuartist said on Jul. 25 '11

Love this logo!!! is cute and girly!

OcDzignr said on Jan. 25 '12

clever & neat

galogo said on Jan. 26 '12

Always love this!!

ihilbig said on Oct. 20 '12

I want to use this logo!!!

ihilbig said on Oct. 20 '12

Customize it for me!

alexmark said on Oct. 21 '12

write on mail. let's talk
markin.alexey@mail.ru

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