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Sweet Wine City

by rikkirogers • Uploaded: Jul. 05 '11
Gallerized Jul. '11 dd253c5a17656ff605ea6d19d4bb82e3.png
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Description: Logo for wine gift basket company catering to big city real estate sellers.

As seen on: www.rikkirogers.com

Status: Client work

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: dark • Wine

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cnasshan said on Jul. 05 '11

This is a great concept, I think the stroke on the bottle is the only thing that needs to go. That, and the type is crowding the bottle a little bit.
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JF said on Jul. 05 '11

Font needs work, imho. Windows in the buildings are far, far too small; as a result this design doesn't shrink well, loses detail. Also, gradient might be a tad too much, and font would perhaps work better if it weren't script-form. My two cents.
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rikkirogers said on Jul. 05 '11

Thank you both for the feedback, all are very good points and I will apply them!
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rikkirogers said on Jul. 05 '11

I took the advice and modified it a bit, will continue working this one until I am totally happy with it!
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cnasshan said on Jul. 06 '11

already looking better. can't wait to see more!
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dezinart said on Jul. 10 '11

It looks nice here, but the one on the website looks... well, not nearly as good as this one.
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cerise said on Jul. 10 '11

^^Agreed
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cresk said on Jul. 11 '11

^^Agreed
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rikkirogers said on Jul. 12 '11

Thanks, everyone! I will tell the client that I've done some editing since I last saw her and see if she would be open to this revision - esp. considering the company is so new and not much promotional material has been printed.

The website is not mine, it belongs to my client! That's for sure. ;)
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JF said on Jul. 12 '11

Congrats, Rikki!
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rikkirogers said on Jul. 12 '11

Thanks. JF! :) It is an honor!

hebe said on Jul. 23 '11

Reminds me something.. Anyway, nice logo!

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