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Abstract Design

by Viktor • Uploaded: Jul. 18 '07
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Description: This is the first logo i upload, looking for some critiques so i can improved my skills

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: abstract

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greenkue said on Jul. 18 '07

Very nice flow in the graphics, but just as much fluidity needs to be put into the text to create some sort of linkage. Right now they remain very seperate and as a result look arbitrary. The rotated "A" looks like an attempt to create flow but because it does not follow through to the rest, looks very awkward. The blue background graphic is not quite working spatially yet and is contradicting it's position in space with the color wanting to come in front of the dominating chromatic design.

Viktor said on Jul. 19 '07

thanks dude i think you are right, i will do the arragement and see how it looks

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