The Idyll Dream

by hananab • Uploaded: Jun. 08 '11

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Description: The Idyll Dream WIP Critiques welcome! Updated to medium sans-serif font, and heavier lines are taken out...
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designtofeel Jun. 08 '11

I don't think the slab-serif works here. Maybe something light enough to match the thin lines? Great illustration.

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JF Jun. 08 '11

%5E%5EAgree with designtofeel. Sans-serif, medium-heave weight is recommended.

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JF Jun. 08 '11

Typo: meant to say %22sans-serif, medium-heavy weight is recommended.%22

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THEArtistT Jun. 08 '11

this looks like a %22I gotta pee%22 dream. agree about the font%5E.

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THEArtistT Jun. 08 '11

take that heavy line off the top of the waves, too.

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hananab Jun. 09 '11

thanks, will update shortly! appreciate the constructive criticisms! :)

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vorox Jul. 26 '11

very interesting

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nido Jul. 27 '11

I think just the moon and waves would be enough... the rest is unnecessary clutter imo... if you could somehow just %22close-up%22 the moon and waves and then set the text accordingly, you would be done.

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type and signs Oct. 11 '11

yeah ... that's a dream ... love it

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