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Avocado Skincare

by stock-design • Uploaded: Jul. 15 '07
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Description: For a range of skincare products; creams, facemasks, conditioners. Made using avocado as a main ingredient.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: beauty • skincare • avocado

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ClimaxDesigns said on Jul. 15 '07

nice, could tighten the kerning in avocado and i dont think skincare is centered
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Kliment said on Jul. 16 '07

nice... i agree that u can think some more for the "skincare"

Thomas said on Jul. 16 '07

Nice and clean! I like it. I agree with others comments, I think you could improve the font (which is?) treatment by tightening it and make "skincare" special. For me, this logo is too focused on "avocado" (font treatment of the company name & illustration) and may be it could be forgotten that this company sells skincare products... and not avocados... May be combinating an eye and an avocado could be a way to explore...

stock-design said on Jul. 17 '07

Thanks for the suggestions, I have tightened kerning between "a", "v" and "o", yes skincare was off centre by about 1.5mm (well spotted!). Have also increased the type size of "skincare" to give it more prominence.

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