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Fantom

by ru_ferret • Uploaded: May. 02 '11
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Description: A sudden idea.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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ru_ferret said on May. 02 '11

Tell me if you have seen this before. Thanks.
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Mason Roberts said on May. 02 '11

I keep reading 'Entom', only until I saw the name of the logo could I work out the negative space... Clever idea, just needs better execution I think! :)
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Mason Roberts said on May. 02 '11

Have you tried making the 'ntom' the same size and case as the 'a'? could work?
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ru_ferret said on May. 02 '11

Upd. Thanks Mason :)
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Mason Roberts said on May. 02 '11

I can read that better, but because the rest of the type is in UPPER CASE, I think that it is also disturbing the readability... Because it draws attention to the capital 'F'. Keep on chuggin and you'll have a winner! :)
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ColinTierney said on May. 02 '11

yeeeeah buddy
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ru_ferret said on May. 02 '11

Stretched the letters. I think it solved the problem!
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Mason Roberts said on May. 02 '11

YES! Great!!! I don't know how that works... but it does! :P Great work man!
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ru_ferret said on May. 02 '11

Inspiration usually come to us at night or even in the morning. Bed time, lol. Thank you for the feedback once again.
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nathantrafford said on May. 02 '11

cool concept and execution. I'd now play with the kerning on the rest of the type, because when i see the 'a', my eye drifts over the the two empty spaces underneath the 'T'. That's going to be hard to fix, but i think is definitely necessary
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ru_ferret said on May. 03 '11

Which one is better guys? :)
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13mu said on May. 03 '11

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13mu said on May. 03 '11

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mfrank said on May. 03 '11

Right :)
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nathantrafford said on May. 03 '11

definitely left for me. it sets the 'a' on a different level than the rest of the letters. still a very tough kerning job. try looking at it upside down when you're kerning
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vernics said on May. 03 '11

Left for me!
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ru_ferret said on May. 03 '11

I like "a" in one line (right), it's more legible for me. The letter looks small in the left, don't you think so?
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ru_ferret said on May. 03 '11

Tried lower case "t". Previous pics here: http://www.dropmocks.com/iUhwz
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jonnyd said on May. 03 '11

Right one for me... the 'a' is still uniform on this one.
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nathantrafford said on May. 03 '11

when the letters are lowercase, this definitely works.
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vergad said on May. 03 '11

^ Agree. works much better!
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ru_ferret said on May. 03 '11

Jonny, Nathan, Matt - thanks a lot. I think the same! :)
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ColinTierney said on May. 03 '11

this works. now take that gradient and toss it. it was so much more mysterious with the grey/black.
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ru_ferret said on May. 04 '11

No problem, thanks again.
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Digitalorange said on May. 11 '11

Brilliant!
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ru_ferret said on May. 11 '11

Fantom is looking at you! Ha-ha-ha.
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Mikeymike said on May. 11 '11

this works nicely, Nikita
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lumavine said on May. 11 '11

Very cool! I read it clearly without realizing the hidden /a/ at first!
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ru_ferret said on May. 11 '11

Cheers, gentlemen.
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javaap said on May. 11 '11

Yeah its perfectly legible! so cool!
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ru_ferret said on May. 12 '11

Hi there, thank you very much!
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jerron said on May. 12 '11

perfect.
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ru_ferret said on May. 12 '11

Thank you Jerron.
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-m- said on May. 16 '11

On russian could not) sorry me. Like this only saw, not as this! http://www.behance.net/gallery/E-Drop-Logo/1157605
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ru_ferret said on May. 16 '11

Are you serious Alex?=)
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-m- said on May. 16 '11

Pohoje). Bukva v bukvah je. Ya slepil o4rednuyu glupost'?
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ru_ferret said on May. 16 '11

http://www.davidairey.com/logo-of-the-month-4/ http://www.logofaves.com/2010/01/illusion/ http://www.logofaves.com/2009/10/fit/ http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/74689 http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/131209
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-m- said on May. 16 '11

Indeed! One of them, as you want. You ask us for similar works. Or do you want one to one?
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ru_ferret said on May. 16 '11

"Fa" is interesting for me.
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-m- said on May. 16 '11

Don't know Fa but Ea i see. http://www.logobar.ru/v3/project/7591/
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ru_ferret said on May. 16 '11

Ok, thank you.
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vasvari said on May. 18 '11

Great Ru!
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ru_ferret said on May. 18 '11

Thanks, Peter!
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rokis said on May. 19 '11

Very interesting! Good job!
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ru_ferret said on May. 20 '11

^ ;)
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-m- said on May. 22 '11

) it is really good job. I won't harm you!
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ru_ferret said on May. 27 '11

I'm not afraid of talking dogs!
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ru_ferret said on Jun. 08 '11

Logo of the Month / May 2011 on Brandstack!
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hitbyreindeer said on Jul. 16 '11

wow how could i miss this?, genius concept!
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ru_ferret said on Jul. 17 '11

Thanks Reno!:)
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ru_ferret said on Sep. 06 '11

Fantom is certainly selected for Logolounge 7 book!
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milash said on Oct. 11 '11

super
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ru_ferret said on Oct. 11 '11

Love you milash:)
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watermarker said on Apr. 18 '12

I love this! Instantly readable.
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ru_ferret said on Apr. 24 '12

Thank you Ray!

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