• Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
Newport Beachside
by guezworks
Logo for a Hotel in Miami Beach
Number of views: 2354
Dated Submitted: Jul. 05 '07
Added to Gallery: Jul. 31 '07

Jul. 05 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

for some reason the alignment seems off, is this on purpose, if so i'd say make it more apparent so it doesnt look like a mistake

Jul. 06 '07

Thomas said:

Clean and nice. Sorry to have same opinion than first comment. I think it could be better if the mark was aligned with the middle of "Newport Beachside" block and may be a little more up.

Jul. 06 '07

guezworks said:

Thanks for the comments. If I would center it, the gap between the words stands out more. It was a suggestion I was back and forth with the client. But they ended up this way.

Jul. 06 '07

KGB said:

I think the mark needs to be centered over the wordspace and the ampersand needs to be centered under it.

Jul. 06 '07

guezworks said:

yeah, makes total sense.

Jul. 31 '07

slightlyshocked said:

Very cool. Awesome color scheme.

Aug. 09 '07

neogrey said:

Trajan again? Why don't you use something freshier within the same style: New Renaissance from Galapagos Design:

http://www.myfonts.com/fonts/galapagos/new-renaissance/

Aug. 09 '07

neogrey said:

Renaissance

Please login/register to make a comment, registration is easy, signup