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Ingenioustries

by nomadcreative • Uploaded: Jul. 01 '07
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Description: Logo for Joel Kelly's writing blog.

As seen on: Ingenioustries.com

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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nomadcreative said on Jul. 02 '07

Does the idea come through? Just asking.

Jormi_Boced said on Jul. 02 '07

It looks like a brain formed by the pollution being emitted from a smoke stack. If that is the idea, then yeah, I got it. It looks like you are mixing the symbolism of a brain fro genious and the smokestack for industry.

Bernard Kowalski said on Jul. 02 '07

Nice. My suggestion is to give the smoke stack a bit more of a body to balance the two objects out a little...maybe atatch it to a very basic building...give it a shot and see what you think. I don't know what will look better...
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firebrand said on Jul. 02 '07

A unique idea but I think the brown is a little overpowering.

nomadcreative said on Jul. 02 '07

Cool thanks - the colours arent for sure - appreciate all your feedback

Bernard Kowalski said on Jul. 02 '07

Maybe that's it, maybe if you used less contrasting colors the two shapes would already be balanced enough...

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