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Ingenioustries
by nomadcreative
Logo for Joel Kelly's writing blog.
Number of views: 799
Dated Submitted: Jul. 01 '07
As seen on: Ingenioustries.com

Jul. 02 '07

nomadcreative said:

Does the idea come through? Just asking.

Jul. 02 '07

Jormi_Boced said:

It looks like a brain formed by the pollution being emitted from a smoke stack.

If that is the idea, then yeah, I got it.

It looks like you are mixing the symbolism of a brain fro genious and the smokestack for industry.

Jul. 02 '07

Bernard Kowalski said:

Nice.
My suggestion is to give the smoke stack a bit more of a body to balance the two objects out a little...maybe atatch it to a very basic building...give it a shot and see what you think. I don't know what will look better...

Jul. 02 '07

firebrand said:

A unique idea but I think the brown is a little overpowering.

Jul. 02 '07

nomadcreative said:

Cool thanks - the colours arent for sure - appreciate all your feedback

Jul. 02 '07

Bernard Kowalski said:

Maybe that's it, maybe if you used less contrasting colors the two shapes would already be balanced enough...

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