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Zebra Color

by Lecart • Uploaded: Feb. 18 '11
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Description: Photography, Video, and more. WIP. Would appreciate some thoughts on how to improve it, or make it work better. Thanks.

Status: Work in progress

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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sean heisler said on Feb. 18 '11

I like the zebra stripes and the shutter concept with the organic handling and then the contrasting modern typography. But I wonder if there is another solution other than a shutter and wonder if that might be why you haven't got some feedback? I don't know. I think people are tired of shutters here. The name seems contradictory to me. What do they do exactly? Is it just black and white stuff?
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Lecart said on Feb. 19 '11

Thank you Sean, that's a very nice analysis. I agree on the overused shutter (that's why i didn't strive to make it that clear, mostly insisted on the zebra stripes. About the name. It works in our language, in English it actually means "Coloured Zebra". Again, thank you. Currently brainstorming on other ways to convey media and zebra. I've updated with a colored mark on dark bg.
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wizemark said on Feb. 19 '11

I actually think that this is brilliant. Wonder how it would look if you add 3rd thin strip on just a few sides, probably inside the shutter, simply to mask it even more and break down that pattern a bit..sweet work!
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sean heisler said on Feb. 19 '11

No prob, Stelian. On the shutter, I think a shutter concept is still a very viable concept, it's just how creatively it's used that is the key and I like what you have done here. I like Srdjan's suggestion too. The color you added here looks nice. Keep pushing, there's bound to be some great things you can do with a Zebra concept!
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lecart said on Feb. 19 '11

Will do, Sean. @ Srdjan, thanks for that tip, will definitely give it a try, at the moment focusing on a new concept. again thanks everyone.

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