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ClarkeRetail

by krazie • Uploaded: Jun. 29 '07
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Description: Clarke Retail : a retail shop. Playing around with the C and R. Comments welcome.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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KGB said on Jun. 29 '07

Interesting idea. I think it reads as a Q though. I also think the inconsistency of the black stroke throws me a bit. Not sure the black is even needed.
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OcularInk said on Jun. 29 '07

I completely agree with KGB. Your logo has a very nice feel to it, but the mark is reading incorrectly right now. What if you extend the gap at the bottom to the top of the mark as well. Then it would read as a 'C' and 'R' more effectively. Just some thoughts. By the way, nice showcase.

krazie said on Jun. 29 '07

hey guys, thanks for the suggestion.. i agree with that ...but im afraid that logo has been used by the client :) thanks anyway ~ cheers
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OcularInk said on Aug. 08 '07

That minor tweak by extending the gap to the top would go a long way. I would suspect your client would consider having it updated if the idea was presented. But I hear you. Cheers!

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