LogoPond - Identity Inspiration -

Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them

Fara Armaneasca: by Graft; Identity proposal for a macedonian community from Romania.; Number of views: 1100; Dated Submitted: Jun. 28 '07

Jun. 28 '07

oveman said:

Salut, romane! :)

Jun. 28 '07

graft said:

Salut si tie.

Jun. 28 '07

KGB said:

nice mark, but the type doesn't fit the style of the mark and is disconnected. Also the lower line of text would be illegible in smaller applications

Jun. 28 '07

graft said:

I kind of agree, the font is not quite the best solution ( it was suggested ).
I'll try to make some changes.
Thanks.

Jun. 28 '07

bogdanv said:

E misto sigla, dar fontul nu imi place!

The mark is fine, I dont't like the font!

Jun. 28 '07

senterbrands said:

The font does not match the mark. However there are a couple things on the mark. When you rotated the people to create the shape you lost all depth because of the multiple gradient angles. Either pick a angle for all of your gradients to follow, or loose them. It distracts the eye and forces you not to focus on the mark as a whole. Or even better yet loose all of the gradients all together. You can still achieve the look with the overlays you already have.

Jun. 28 '07

graft said:

Thnks for tips guys.
I just update it, what do you think ?

Jun. 28 '07

senterbrands said:

Personally I would go with a nice and clean sans serif.

Jun. 28 '07

OcularInk said:

I like the logo, but I too think you can lose the gradients and just use the overlays. Also, in regards to the font choice, your logo mark has sharp angles and circles. Maybe try something along the lines of Avant Garde, Futura, or Century Gothic. Doesn't have to be one of those, but something along those lines might look nice.