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David Tlale

by JWTK • Uploaded: Jun. 27 '07
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Description: David Tlale is south african fashion designer. David prioritizes style coupled to expert use of fabrics. his designs are characterized by finite detail and innovative design. This is the very first design and crit would be great.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: fashion • david

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luckysign said on Jun. 27 '07

very cool...not sure about the period after his name. but very elegant...is he a men's fashion designer?
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firebrand said on Jun. 27 '07

I like the idea here but I feel the scrolls could be better integrated into the figure. The tie seems too short (could use a little lapel detail to rectify this). The pocket and arm detail is too subtle.
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chanpion said on Jun. 27 '07

Agree with Firebrand. At the mo, it looks like the floral motif is placed on the figure. If the floral treatment could be morphed into the man, then this is a winner.
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smartinup said on Jun. 28 '07

like it a lot, but the legs look a little weird, almost feminine. maybe its the angle of the right foot (his left)?!?!?
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JWTK said on Jun. 29 '07

Thanks for the crit guys. @firebrand: I agree, the scrolls could be better intergrated & now that you mention it the tie is a bit short. @luckysign: He designs for both men & women but the male silhouette is more a representation of his identity as a designer.

identego said on Jun. 29 '07

A striking design, i thought perhaps the tie etc were his style but very well done

waltermurray said on Jul. 06 '07

Hey I love the direction and think that all the comments about unifying the twirls are spot on. This could almost dowith a Unilever logo intergration of the pattern into the vector of the guy. You have to understand as well that there should be some extra special attention to detail and choice of type because everyone os into the whole vector thing at the moment and as shuch we've all got to go the extra mile to create uneque marks that aren't just part of whats going for that time of the year. Overall nice start :]

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