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Jaguar Ecological Reserve

by robertscully • Uploaded: Jun. 20 '07
Gallerized Aug. '07 Jaguar.gif
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Description: Design this logo for the Jaguar Ecological Reserve let me know what you think

As seen on: robertscully.com

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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2695Design said on Jun. 20 '07

Very nice. I like how you focused on just the eyes as far as the jaguar is concerned. I also like the abstract-ish route with the pattern/shading.
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KGB said on Aug. 23 '07

Not an attack, just my opinion. Robertscully, i generally like your work, but this one seems a little sophomoric to me. The type falls flat. Jaguar, the important word is overpowered by the other 2 words. "The" is lost in the mix of the words and eyes and spots. I've seen a lot better from you.
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OcularInk said on Aug. 23 '07

KGB, isn't the important part of the wordmark 'Ecological Reserve'? Or am I thinking logically to the wrong conclusion? :-P
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KGB said on Aug. 23 '07

I'm sure there are a lot of Ecological Reserves out there. "Jaguar" is what makes this different.
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OcularInk said on Aug. 23 '07

I hear ya...and see your point.
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KGB said on Aug. 23 '07

no, it doesn't have to be the "best in the world" but it should be as good as it can be. I'm going to hush before I make climax angry. I don't want to do that. I (heart) logopond.

ghorsman said on Aug. 24 '07

I have to side with KGB. Though it is a nice graphic rendering, the typography could be improved. Ever thought of using something else besides Helvetica (or, God forbid, Arial)? Otherwise, nice imaging.

rachelg said on Aug. 26 '07

The idea is great, but it seems broken up a bit- making your eye jump from jag collage to the type beside it. Could almost be done with the fun collage look shaped along the face and neckline of the jaguar and have the type rolling across that without the different colored text... I'm a total rookie so not sure how much critique I can offer, but I like the piecey-ness of the jaguar- if piecey-ness can be considered a word LOL
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nido said on Aug. 26 '07

@ climax... censor him.. censor him.. LOL
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kaimere said on Aug. 26 '07

Im looking at this and then looking at the comments ... personally Im kinda loving this ... Playful but solid and serious ... great logo dude, the hardest logos to do while tring to create awareness and stay true to the cause. Definetly a lot of mileage and longevity in this mark.

Great work....
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nido said on Aug. 26 '07

@climax... censor kaimere too.. censor him.. LOL
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kaimere said on Aug. 26 '07

p.s. call me MR . Bs but the darting between the interation of the symbol and the logotype is genius ...
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nido said on Aug. 26 '07

pleeaassseee.. anyone!!!

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