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Real or Fake client not set I am actively looking for critiques
- Jaguar Ecological Reserve
- by robertscully
- Design this logo for the Jaguar Ecological Reserve let me know what you think
- Number of views: 2521
- Date Submitted: Jun. 20 '07
- Added to Gallery: Aug. 22 '07
- As seen on: robertscully.com
Aug. 23 '07
KGB said:Not an attack, just my opinion. Robertscully, i generally like your work, but this one seems a little sophomoric to me. The type falls flat. Jaguar, the important word is overpowered by the other 2 words. "The" is lost in the mix of the words and eyes and spots. I've seen a lot better from you.
Aug. 23 '07
OcularInk said:KGB, isn't the important part of the wordmark 'Ecological Reserve'? Or am I thinking logically to the wrong conclusion? :-P
Aug. 23 '07
KGB said:I'm sure there are a lot of Ecological Reserves out there. "Jaguar" is what makes this different.
Aug. 23 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:a logo doesnt have to be the best in the world or the best by a designer to work, this logo while not the best in the world overall it still a solid identity and could very easily tightened up
Aug. 23 '07
KGB said:no, it doesn't have to be the "best in the world" but it should be as good as it can be. I'm going to hush before I make climax angry. I don't want to do that. I (heart) logopond.
Aug. 23 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:KGB, i'm not some irrational child and your comments are welcome and do not anger me, besides that, even if they did what would you expect me to do, censor you? that would be a bit ridiculous.
Aug. 24 '07
ghorsman said:I have to side with KGB. Though it is a nice graphic rendering, the typography could be improved. Ever thought of using something else besides Helvetica (or, God forbid, Arial)? Otherwise, nice imaging.
Aug. 26 '07
rachelg said:The idea is great, but it seems broken up a bit- making your eye jump from jag collage to the type beside it. Could almost be done with the fun collage look shaped along the face and neckline of the jaguar and have the type rolling across that without the different colored text... I'm a total rookie so not sure how much critique I can offer, but I like the piecey-ness of the jaguar- if piecey-ness can be considered a word LOL
Aug. 26 '07
kaimere said:Im looking at this and then looking at the comments ... personally Im kinda loving this ... Playful but solid and serious ... great logo dude, the hardest logos to do while tring to create awareness and stay true to the cause. Definetly a lot of mileage and longevity in this mark.
Great work....
Aug. 26 '07
kaimere said:p.s. call me MR . Bs but the darting between the interation of the symbol and the logotype is genius ...
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Jun. 20 '07
2695Design said:Very nice. I like how you focused on just the eyes as far as the jaguar is concerned. I also like the abstract-ish route with the pattern/shading.