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Nicole by Nicole Miller
by robertscully
Logo and Brand designed for Nicole Miller for JcPenny stores
Number of views: 812
Dated Submitted: Jun. 20 '07
As seen on: RobertScully.com

Jun. 20 '07

dache said:

Why not just use the the Nicole that is used in the Miller text?

I dont think it looks very pro to have the "by" part. I imagine this perfume? Compare it to something like Dior or . They dont use the by...

Jun. 20 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

yeah drop the 'by' and center the cursive underneath the nicole in white letting it slighly over lap, that n looks like an h though.

Jun. 21 '07

Burn Creative said:

I think it looks fine the way it is.

Jun. 21 '07

kaimere said:

not sure on the by is alll but cool

Jun. 22 '07

vinny said:

I think one problem with the 'by' is that visually the bottom line created by that word and the 'nicole miller' create a sloping composition that makes the whole thing look off balance.

I love the typeface and colors, I think with a little tightening up this one will be great.

Jun. 22 '07

robertscully said:

I agee that it would look better without the "by" but was done back in 2005 and is in all JC Penny stores

But thank for the feedback it helps for the future projects

-rob

Sep. 23 '07

tini1 said:

i like it...know the brand..it fits well (and have seen in jcpenney, took notice) so, you did a great job;)

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