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Pure Beech
by robertscully
Logo and Brand Designed for Bed Bath & Beyond
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Dated Submitted: Jun. 20 '07
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Jun. 20 '07

nomadcreative said:

Colours give it a nice feel. I just wish the leaves were a little simpler. Perhaps thicker lines, and that space where the two leaves branch off could be cleaned up. That part feels a little awkward to me.

Jun. 20 '07

Blind.[mikey] said:

Great colors! I'd play around with the leaves myself though... it's close but doesn't seem all the way there yet...

Jun. 20 '07

Blind.[mikey] said:

*I also notice that neither leaf is in front of eachother, you might play around with the veins to create more closure.

Jun. 22 '07

vinny said:

Another great improvement would be to drop the word 'Beech' down a bit, it seems to rest too high above 'sateen'.

I also agree the leaves overlap strangely, but I love the colors and the overall shape of the mark.

Good work!

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