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I am actively looking for critiques
- Harris COMP 4
- by Ahab
- Here is another variation of the HARRIS logo project
- Number of views: 1649
- Dated Submitted: Jun. 16 '07
- Added to Gallery: Jul. 05 '08
Jun. 17 '07
ahab said:Thanks guys...
Firebrand: Yeah, the scripted "structures" was just another option.
Relevant: At this point I am paying them...just one of those clients. I might just keep the deposit and move on with this. At least I have some nice portfolio pieces huh?
Jun. 17 '07
Relevant said:Very true. Could be used to show clients your design process or something like that.
Jun. 18 '07
ahab said:Yeah, that is exactly how I have been presenting a long line of good comps. I usually call it a "comp series" and show all the different avenues of comps I created for one specific project. I think it really helps show versatility and your broad range of creative thinking.
Jun. 18 '07
dache said:3 concepts is pretty standard wouldnt you say? This is my favourite symbol of the lot however there are some dirty curves in the middle, perhaps its image quality though.
Jun. 18 '07
ahab said:Oh yeah at least 3. BUT...if you feel you have 3 very strong concepts then I say showcase them to potential clients. Again, it could show off your diversity and versatility.
Dirty curves: I think it is just the image quality...which I don't know why, I've been saving them at the highest jpeg setting.
Thanks for the comment.
Jun. 18 '07
ahab said:OH! one more thing on that...
Most peopl liked the see through 3D "H" comp I did (first one) and you liked this one best...If I would have only showed you the first one I would have missed your approval on the whole project.
I think showing a series could help you impress a broader range of potentials.
Aug. 06 '07
KGB said:nice. this reminds me of a logo I did a few years ago: http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/2575
Aug. 07 '07
ahab said:Yeah, very cool. I like the style you implemented in yours. It's a bit more illustrated then mine.
Great minds think alike.:)-)
Jul. 13 '08
huyendesigner said:love it !
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Jun. 17 '07
firebrand said:I like the shadow detail where the arch meets the pencil - makes it kind of monumental. Not sure if 'structures' should be pencil written.