You should have put a light line outlining the entire raven that is the same as the text. That would have made the raven look like it is more a part of the mark than something stuffed into the background. There is something not quite right about the raven silhouette as well, but I can't put my finger on it. I just don't think it flows in with the font and liquid treatment as well as it should.
I think this is just too similar to Si Scott style. This is probably too detailed to be a good logo at small sizes. I am interested to see if this was developed further.
chanpion said on Jun. 16 '07
chgvisual said on Jun. 17 '07
THEArtistT said on Sep. 07 '08
lumavine said on Oct. 14 '10
ManuelPersa said on Sep. 06 '11
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