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White Lines Snowboard Mag
by redfour
White Lines Snowboard Magazine t-shirt logo.
Number of views: 1049
Dated Submitted: Jun. 15 '07

Jun. 15 '07

Mikey said:

I like the concept. However although it's not at all hard to read it as "snow board' I would re-touch on the cloud, to make it look, 'B'ish' if that makes sence. Maybe the outline on the cloud could get gradually thinner to the left, or even try rotating the cloud clockwise a few degrees. However, overall, great concept. Nice work.

Jun. 15 '07

sdijock said:

redfour - Although I think the cloud is effective as part of the "b" I keep wanting to read the left side of the cloud as a lower-case "c". I wish I had a viable alternative for you.

Jun. 15 '07

smartinup said:

no way to make the cloud with just two arches? i agree with mikey

Jun. 15 '07

redfour said:

Thanks for your feeback guys. Really appreciate it. The cloud is an exact copy of the BBC weather report's snow forecast symbol. As it's for a UK based magazine I really wanted to keep it as close to the original as possible.
Regards
redfour

Jun. 16 '07

stoobs said:

redfour ... please take a look at my post in the forum ... are you interested in creating a logo for the british snowboard team(s) ?
Please e-mail me ... we are looking for graphic designers with an interest in snowboarding (british based would be good ... but hey ... boaders of the world unite!)

Jun. 16 '07

SpencerLavery said:

Awesome.

Jul. 26 '07

will said:

Really nice and very clever! Good work.
Will

Oct. 15 '07

TernaciousT said:

Don't change a thing! I really like this type of logo. You don't even need to read the b in the cloud as your mind tells you the word is snowboard, as the only snow letter oard word around is snowboard! Well done!

Jan. 18 '08

moverdrive said:

I actually think this is pretty easy to read, but then I live in a snowboarding community. Very clever.

Jan. 18 '08

contrabrand said:

it works! people will be stoked on it you could always pull the symbol out for die cuts :)

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