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holymonk studios

by boazjohn • Uploaded: Jun. 12 '07
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Description: holymonk

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: holymonk

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chanpion said on Jun. 12 '07

Simplifying the monk illustration even further would be good. At the moment, it looks too cliparty. The studio overlapping the 'y' looks abit odd too. I think you can find a more suitable font other than Eras. Sorry to ramble, but I find this has great potential. Cheers!

Craven91 said on Jun. 12 '07

I concur with chanpion. The monk looks slapped on there. Try to explore working him in with the type.

boazjohn said on Jun. 13 '07

thx guys..i;ll keep up..

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