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Dotted line

by JWTK • Uploaded: Jun. 11 '07
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Description: Dotted line business auditing services

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Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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abeall said on Jun. 11 '07

I like the illustration of the guy quite a bit but feel there's too much going on in this logo for my taste -- the dotted mark and the dude seem to conflict against each other for me. What if your illustrated the dude in a dotted line?
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JWTK said on Jun. 11 '07

funny enough, before i uploaded this logo i felt it was a bit unbalanced and like you say, alot is happening. i actually started to play around with it before i uploaded it but thought i should put it out there and explore what does not work. thanks for the crit.

fab said on Jun. 11 '07

I like the image with the dotted circle and also the illustration of guy, but I think they don't match together. What about simplifying the logo, by substituting the d for another dotted element related to business (like a check list on a folder with a pen or some) and taking off the guy? (maybe as abeall said a dotted guy, but just the chest and face not the whole body)
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JWTK said on Jun. 12 '07

i really like your suggestion fab, going to explore it for sure. nice one.

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