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icons
by smartinup
icons created to represent the three forms a patient education product can be used within hospitals. These will be used on a sales lit. piece im working on. I know they are not logos, but i wanted to post them any. 1. CD-ROM 2. Intranet 3. Website my main goal was to create an icon that created interest, and draw the readers eye to it. There is copy that is placed with them to go into deatail about the services.
Number of views: 1016
Dated Submitted: Jun. 08 '07

Jun. 08 '07

Pookie said:

WOW. very cool. caught my eye immiediately. Visually grabbing, simple and direct - 10 out of 10!

Jun. 08 '07

pnautilus said:

The changing line width on the website threw me. It would be a bit more cohesive if you maintained the line width and added the arrows

Jun. 08 '07

smartinup said:

Pookie: thanks, i dont know about 10 out of 10, but hey, ill take the kind words.

pnaut: thanks, ill try that out. although im worried arrows added to #3 may get it a little too busy, but it's worth a try.

Jun. 13 '07

pngised said:

A very nice work.
It seems your goal is next.

Jun. 13 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

For future reference if you need feedback on non logo items please use the forums.

Jun. 13 '07

smartinup said:

will do climax

Jun. 13 '07

firebrand said:

These icons have a nice, contemporary feel. The intranet one is beautiful.

Jun. 13 '07

fab said:

Wow!!! Is not easy to express those concepts (intranet and web), u did a great job!!! (On the one for website inverting the position of the little circles would give you an impression of perspective. The closer circle bigger that the farther one)

Jun. 13 '07

kult house said:

These look like the three iconic stages of some sort of file-sharing process, or CD burner.

Jun. 13 '07

smartinup said:

fab: nice call, i switched them up and it is better.

pnaut: increased the weight and it is much better, left the arrows off though.

thanks everyone-

Jun. 19 '07

arabicdes said:

the idea is wonderfull!! creative job

Jun. 29 '07

mdta said:

Very impressive, the colours and the shapes all match perfectly

Apr. 21 '08

sticks said:

awesome stuff

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