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Logo Laboratory

by Mint • Uploaded: Jun. 04 '07
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Description: This is something I have been working on for a logo website. Constructive criticism would be much appreciated.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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Craven91 said on Jun. 04 '07

I get the flask. I get the L. I think it's a good design to bring out both elements. My only problem is the black on black (or whatever percentage black in the gradient it falls on). Did you try another background first? Maybe an outline of the reverse L? Or maybe just white? I can see this working the way it is now on something like a business card where the black L is glossy. Just concerned it may get a little lost on the screen. I also might bring the text into alignment with the edges of the flask and not have it sticking out past the sides. This one has very good potential. Keep at it.
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Jeff Fisher LogoMotives said on Jun. 04 '07

The black on black is distracting...and a lab beaker isn't closed completely at the top. Having it open a bit might alter the angle of the L's a bit and make them easier to read.

Mint said on Jun. 05 '07

@ Craven91, I was concerned about the black on black. I think the white might work well. @ Jeff, you right about the beaker. Thanks for input guys, much appreciated. I 'll make some amendments and post up the result.

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