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Facchinelo

by mabu • Uploaded: Sep. 05 '10
Gallerized Sep. '10 9b1c48363f8360f94f79fb0485f7690f.png
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Description: Facchinelo is a small family-owned business handed down through 3 generations. They produce finger lickin' good olives and olive oils.

As seen on: mabu.dk

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: mads burcharth • mabu • texture • bespoke • handwriting

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mabu said on Sep. 05 '10

2nd take on the Facchinelo logotype. I'd love to hear some thoughts.
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Art Machine said on Sep. 05 '10

Very nice. I prefer this one, mainly for legibility reasons. I feel this baby needs a little more randomness in the baseline or a swash into the descender line somewhere, maybe on the "n" or the "l".
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vernics said on Sep. 05 '10

Agree with Julian. Overall very appealing.
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milou said on Sep. 05 '10

To be honest I like this the way it is. I'm loving your typography works.
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andreiu said on Sep. 05 '10

I like it, still it seems to me the text isn't on a perfect line, it's somehow bended upwards. Do you know what I mean? I think the "i" is the problem, seems to be a bit smaller.
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milou said on Sep. 05 '10

^ Agreed, the i and n in down part seems little odd regarding to the rest.
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davishama said on Sep. 05 '10

I agree with everyone here. I'm sure you will take a look and solve this. Great logo and showcase, Mads.
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hyperborea said on Sep. 05 '10

congrats on the gallery spot. well deserved.
and great showcase man! just keep up the good work.
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bitencourt said on Sep. 05 '10

good one, Mabu!
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crislabno said on Sep. 05 '10

need some work on lines. but it;s lovely either way
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myway999 said on Sep. 05 '10

great work, Mabu! andreiu may have a point here, but it looks great anyway:p
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Mikeymike said on Sep. 06 '10

terrific type work. great stuff here and in your showcase.
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mabu said on Sep. 06 '10

Thanks a bunch for the kind words and feedback everyone. I've revised the issues on the /i/ and /n/.
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epicantus said on Sep. 07 '10

Lovely type work!
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michaelspitz said on Sep. 10 '10

Great type Mads!
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mabu said on Sep. 10 '10

Cheers Michael and epicantus.
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jippy rinaldi said on Sep. 11 '10

staring at it for almost two glass of coke and i cant find the downside. Simply beautiful, mabu..

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