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Bays!de Community Church

by cobaltcow • Uploaded: Aug. 31 '10
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Description: Client needed a modern, clean rebrand representing community & life.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: dots • church

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lumavine said on Aug. 31 '10

Interesting! I would simplify it a bit to keep it clean and modern. Fewer dots, and simplify the border - or loose it all together. Good start!
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adambomb said on Aug. 31 '10

I agree with the comment above. I'm also not sure how I feel about the "Coolvetica" type. That font always looks retro/70s to me, so I'm not sure if it's appropriate for this.
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cobaltcow said on Aug. 31 '10

Appreciate the comments. Yeah I'm not convinced with the Coolvetica either, but I liked that the tail on the y wasn't hanging out there. The border was added at the end to add some balance. I guess dropping the name back to lower case would help balance that. It's only a 3rd string option for this one but I'll keep playing.

LiverpoolFanAU said on Aug. 31 '10

Did you do all the dots yourself, or with a brush?
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Chad Sanderson said on Sep. 01 '10

Any time I see a logo like this, I think of Anti-Particle. Even if I didn't, I'm not entirely sure it captures the feeling of a church. Good luck though!
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jmutton said on Sep. 01 '10

I'd have to agree with Chad about the Anti-Particle logo.
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cobaltcow said on Sep. 01 '10

I'll have to check out anti-particle.. Yep I did every circle individually. I've redone it with fewer & larger bubbles, just working on the type and I'll upload it for review. Thanks for the feedback.

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