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I am actively looking for critiques
- colombia
- by akitash
- productos exóticos
- Number of views: 3488
- Dated Submitted: Jun. 02 '07
- Added to Gallery: Jun. 04 '07
Jun. 04 '07
kult house said:That colored "b" is extremely distracting from an otherwise pleasant logo.
Jun. 04 '07
akitash said:Thank you all!
Yes Kult, the Colombian colors are yellow, blue and red, and these are represented on the type.. and that blue is that i need. What can i do? (excuse my english)
Jun. 04 '07
kult house said:The blue is represented in a very small area of the total logo. The way it is, it's quite offsetting. Since you need to incorporate those three key colors, I'd strongly consider re-working the logo to tie the blue in more, making it more prevalent in some way.
Also, you can see a faint white outline around the colors within the letters (o,o,b,a). It's not very flattering, and I'd try and fill in the space completely with color.
Otherwise, I enjoy the design in general. Also, the lettering looks hand-made, except it looks almost as if it was drawn with a mouse (look at the "a"). Assuming I'm right, at larger resolutions, any unrefined areas will really be obvious. I might consider re-drawing the characters again at a better resolution, then scaling them to the appropriate size. Draw on paper, scan, vectorize in Illustrator.
Jun. 05 '07
reds said:i like how it inspires visions of latin wildness.
kult house>>thank you for providing us with your insight!
Jun. 05 '07
akitash said:Kult: Thank you for your comments! These are very important for my job. Tus apreciaciones serán tomadas en cuenta y lo discutiré con el cliente. Todo lo que sea para mejorar, bienvenido!
Sin embargo, con esta marca se resaltan los colores cálidos y las formas rústicas (la tipografía existe, no es dibujada a mano), para reflejar el calor humano del pueblo, las bondades del clima y acercar al público a un establecimiento lleno de energía, arte y folclor. El color azul es necesario por ser parte de la bandera, pero por tratarse de un color frío, al darle algún protagonismo, le quitaría la vida que el símbolo quiere transmitir...
A todos los demás gracias igual!
(excuse my english, i'll try to write it better soon)
Jun. 07 '07
kxmode said:Salsa-ish! Nice! Akitash how about changing the "b" to blue instead of using a color fill?
Jun. 16 '07
hshujau said:Nice logo.
Jun. 19 '07
ahab said:great design!
Jun. 25 '07
macmiami said:pregunta? es el logo para una tienda? o para promocionar a colombia?
Gracias
Aug. 08 '07
akitash said:Respuesta: es el logo para una tienda que vende productos exóticos, dirigida a público extranjero en especial... so, por ahí derecho vende a Colombia ;)
Aug. 23 '08
michaelcampos said:hola! buen concepto y buen uso de colores brillante!
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Jun. 02 '07
chanpion said:Fabulous use of colours! I don't think you need to change a thing! Nice job.