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Noodle Station

by srighosh • Uploaded: Jun. 01 '07
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Description: Logo for a fast chinese food restaurant in a mall. Keywords were fast, energetic, chinese and urban.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: • chinese • Restaurant

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Craven91 said on Jun. 01 '07

Can this work without the stripes in the middle? The figure is getting lost.

srighosh said on Jun. 01 '07

Then the logo would loose its energetic nature, which was an essential part of the look...
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kaimere said on Jun. 01 '07

hmmm something a bit wrong here .... bit convoluted ... and feels more japanese by association

srighosh said on Jun. 01 '07

Hmm, by Japanese the connect is more towards zen and minimalism i reckon, this is far more opulent for zen, and the central figure (the man with the bowl) is inspired from Chinese calligraphy... also the font is oriental..
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chanpion said on Jun. 01 '07

One thing can try....the box that holds the name can be rounded off.

conan said on Jun. 01 '07

The "d", "l" and "i" are causing a problem with the vertical centering in the box. I wonder what it might look like with more space under "noodle station".

Craven91 said on Jun. 04 '07

I agree with the two suggesstion above (chanpion and conan). And to follow up with mine - maybe the stripes could be faded a bit?

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