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TRS (concept)
by Art Machine
This is a logo concept for an events merchandise sales company. I want to know whether you have already seen the mark I created anywhere. It seems so simple someone must have done it already. Comments please.
Number of views: 1837
Date Submitted: May. 31 '07

May. 31 '07

dache said:

I think its a cool symbol. Maybe you can add some perspective to it though, like having the upper arrow going a tad further into the distance as for the moment I feel it leaning forward, top heavy from the bottom arrow head - which gives a bit of a negative connotation. It would be better, for me, if it had a harder gradient, like two colors - say arrow head and arrow "body". The gradient doesnt seem optically centered, cant say. Again this is just what I think about this symbol and how you can improve on it.


May. 31 '07

Art Machine said:

Hey Dache,

your comment is always welcome!
Concerning your suggestions...distorting it to make it more unique is something I also thought about, but that ruins the shapes of the arrows going inside (the negative space).
As for alternative gradients I'll try some. : )


May. 31 '07

M_I_D_A_S said:

Hey A M,
nice logo. nice and clean... à la WII. What font is that bro?
cheers,
M


May. 31 '07

Art Machine said:

Thank you marc, the font is "SKYfontThick"


Jun. 03 '07

kaimere said:

loving the mark ... class


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