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Flock Entertainment

by OcularInk • Uploaded: May. 30 '07
Gallerized Aug. '08 7f86f5fe6360a466e7243df060455b48.png
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Description: Created for a film studio specializing in black and white films. The logo is meant to convey a soft, effortless, and dynamic feeling. The symbol is a combination of a 3D letter F + 2 birds in flight.

As seen on: For Sale

Status: For sale

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

Tags: creative • design • gray • grey • trademark

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senterbrands said on May. 30 '07

Kevin...this is very nice and smoothing man! The only thing that worries me is at the thumbnail size man the text and mark is hard to see. Maybe a tad darker shade of gray and a thicker stroke? I dunno!?!
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OcularInk said on May. 31 '07

Dude, I couldn't help but think the same thing in regards to the shade of gray. I think that helped the line weight too? Thanks, buddy!!
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Art Machine said on May. 31 '07

Ocular, I think this is great! And I love the perspective feature. Maybe I'm wrong but the space between the O and C seems to be a little too much.
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mcdseven said on May. 31 '07

Howdy Kev, Agree with all of the above...tis a great piece, well done.
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ClimaxDesigns said on May. 31 '07

yeah i was going to say the same thing, something is visually off with eh lo relationship that is throwing off the oc relationship, cant help but wonder if the o is evenly spaced from the bar of the l or the serif?
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bpotstra said on May. 31 '07

Climax beat me too it - I was going to suggest you sweeten up your kerning of both the "FLO" in FLOCK, and the "TAI" in ENTERTAINMENT. Also, I'm not convinced the 'wireframe' is the best approach with the mark. Even if its really faint shades of grey, I think it would have more pull. -Brian
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OcularInk said on May. 31 '07

Thanks everyone for all the constructive feedback. So very helpful. I have so much to learn. FLOCK type has been adjusted. :-)

Thomas said on Jun. 04 '07

Perfect.

Craven91 said on Jun. 04 '07

I agree with it being "effortless."
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OcularInk said on Jun. 04 '07

:) Thanks to both of you!!
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OcularInk said on Sep. 02 '07

Did anyone notice the bird shapes? Just curious. Or is that a stretch?
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firebrand said on Sep. 02 '07

I saw them without being prompted dOc.
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OcularInk said on Sep. 02 '07

Yippee!! :-D
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moverdrive said on Nov. 08 '07

Terrific concept and execution! Got it right away...
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nido said on Aug. 16 '08

flock me!.. never saw the birds.. nice!
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koodoz said on Aug. 16 '08

I noticed the birds Kev :) Excellent concept mate!
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firebrand said on Aug. 17 '08

I've always liked this one, Kev. Well deserving of a gallery spot :)
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webcore said on Aug. 17 '08

This is great I was thinking most title screens on film aren't usually upon white. An alternative version with filled "wings" and a neutral to the opposing wing would look great.
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OcularInk said on Aug. 19 '08

Thanks you guys. I'm glad the birds are coming through. @ webcore : If I remember to, I'll post up an alternative version. That sounds like a nice idea. Peace!
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hindmarshdesign said on Aug. 19 '08

They're some cool birds you got there.
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trams said on Aug. 22 '08

So simple... just brilliant.
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dbunk said on Oct. 11 '09

http://www.crowdspring.com/projects/graphic_design/logo/leading_web_software_company_needs_logo_redesign/gallery/3d_by_kikk
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OcularInk said on Oct. 14 '09

Thanks Jess, Dan and Sindur. Sindur, thanks for the link. :-)

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