Hawaii Tours

by AMP • Uploaded: Jul. 26 '10 - Gallerized: Aug. '10

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Description: See 1 color version here: http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/112610
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AMP Jul. 27 '10

Thanks Bronte. I will be uploading a 1 color version shortly. I will definitely give the brown background a try :)

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mfrank Jul. 27 '10

Interesting mark. I'd suggest separating the mark from the wording a bit more and it looks like the wording isn't centered with the mark.

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milou Jul. 27 '10

This is cool mark, very cool. Type doesn't match it for me though.

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AMP Jul. 27 '10

Thanks for the compliments. I will try it with a different type. This one's clearly not workin' :)

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rudy hurtado Jul. 27 '10

Nice feel to it, good job.

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AMP Jul. 27 '10

updated font. better?

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mfrank Jul. 27 '10

I'm liking the update.

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AMP Jul. 27 '10

Thanks Matt. I like it much better this way as well.

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milou Jul. 28 '10

%5E Yes now this is it!

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nitish.b Jul. 28 '10

do u think by stretching the tail of the mark a lil more down, could make it look more balanced?

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AMP Jul. 29 '10

@ nitish, do you think it looks unbalanced? the drawing is based on an actual bird (can't remember the name at the moment), but i don't mind stretching it a bit if it would look better that way. and thanks for the float :)

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mfrank Jul. 29 '10

That type is bothering the crap out of me. It looks blurry because of the variances in stem weight or something...

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ericneal Jul. 29 '10

very nice! I know a lot of the essence of the logo is in the texture, but I'd be curious to see a solid mark which would work better for scaling, great job!

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AMP Jul. 29 '10

@ matt - it does look blurry here. it doesn't look like that in the ai file but since it will be printed in smaller scales i should probably pick a heavier font.*@eric - thanks! i will post a solid version at some point.

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AMP Jul. 30 '10

updated type. thickened up a bit.

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JoePrince Aug. 06 '10

This is fabulous looking.

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AMP Aug. 07 '10

Thank you Joe :)

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libran005 Aug. 09 '10

Brilliant selection of colors and loved the textured look too.*Maybe the font could be enhanced a little.

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jerron Aug. 09 '10

Beautiful mark, boring type.

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firebrand Aug. 09 '10

I actually think it looks stronger in black and white.

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AMP Aug. 09 '10

thanks for all your comments and floats!%0D*@jerron and libran - i am open to any suggestions for something i could do differently with the type. i just didn't want something that was busy or overpowering since the mark has quite a bit going on.%0D*%0D*@firebrand - i might prefer the b%26w as well :) but since it's for tourists, i wanted it to feel a bit more fun.

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joelalexander Aug. 10 '10

now this is cool! love the ruffed up finish

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raja Aug. 11 '10

lovely art work - agree with Roy that the B W looks much better - due to tribal reasons :)

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AMP Aug. 12 '10

Thank you alex and raja. i agree that the b%26w looks more tribal.

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logomotive Aug. 12 '10

I like em both. Great work.

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AMP Aug. 12 '10

Thanks very much Mike.

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