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WIP

by S.vanElderen • Uploaded: Jul. 13 '10
Gallerized Jul. '10 acd252c7b22c429e9a8e47414152b8c8.png
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Description: A WIP for a costum interior designer. Monotone is up here to and the colors are based on materials

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

Tags: stripes • designer • interior • savael

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engar said on Jul. 13 '10

Nice :)
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S.vanElderen said on Jul. 13 '10

Thkx Engar :-)
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JF said on Jul. 14 '10

Nice placement of mark w/type. Not only is it balanced (proprtional, proper) but the arrangement is eye-catching. Good work.
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S.vanElderen said on Jul. 15 '10

Thanks Jf, I was pooling for the right place, and i thinking that maybe I'm gonna center the mark and place the name on the same side and Hight
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S.vanElderen said on Jul. 15 '10

Oh and thanks for all the floats :-)
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logotivity said on Jul. 16 '10

well deserved floats, nice job..
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helvetic brands said on Jul. 17 '10

I really like the design. If you haven't already tried, I would recommend reducing the amount of lines by 50% and increasing the contour weight 2 fold as it may give more stability to the design.
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helvetic brands said on Jul. 17 '10

Seeing it in small, perhaps remove the white sections all together.
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S.vanElderen said on Jul. 17 '10

thanks for the advice David :-) (if it's okay to call you by your first name), On this one I allready reduced the amount of lines and I was wondering if more was needed that's why I posted the WIP with comments allowed. Thanks, I will definitely check it.
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Agencija said on Jul. 19 '10

@Dache as Helvetic real estate http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/44535
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S.vanElderen said on Aug. 09 '10

Prommised to update, I tried the 50% less stipes and here is the result. I'm staying with the old design. [img]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4135/4876766578_fda0ff67ae.jpg[/img]

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