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la pizzeria

by tfishman • Uploaded: Jul. 12 '10
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Description: WIP- logo for a local pizza shop

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: pizzeria • pizza

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nido said on Jul. 12 '10

cool.. type needs to be bigger imo... but otherwise a fun illustrated logo.
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tfishman said on Jul. 12 '10

thanks for the comment, i enlarged the type a tad
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nido said on Jul. 12 '10

yeah.. dont think a tad will do it.. the type still seems lost a little... again, the illustration part is fantastic and I could see it working well for a pizzeria... great job on that...

maybe if you place "la pizzeria" in uppercase where the tag is and have the tag sit outside the circle?
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nido said on Jul. 12 '10

^or at least see how that'll look..
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milou said on Jul. 12 '10

Agreed on the illustration, good job, fun. I would try another type for it, it's not readable enough. La pizzeria look good, but the other sentence is not. Keep it up!
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tfishman said on Jul. 12 '10

ok i think this is better, i don't think the other line was needed anymore. thanks to both of you for the help!
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tfishman said on Jul. 15 '10

I updated the hat a bit, raising it up to make the outer circle more proportioned, being that these will be printed on round stickers. more critique anyone?

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