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ITORAE

by brainchilds • Uploaded: May. 26 '10
Gallerized May. '10 e29505d8125f76e870bbf3d3dfa37c2f.png
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Description: Font ITORAE is mine.

As seen on: http://brainchild.pl/

Status: Just for fun

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: typography • type • typo • logotype • logo

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myway999 said on May. 26 '10

i like this, very well executed idea!
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ethereal said on May. 26 '10

Very nice.
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bigoodis said on May. 26 '10

nice font :)
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michaelspitz said on May. 26 '10

Loving the illustration! Great tones & shading. Is there a reason the ground is sliced/uneven? Almost looks like it's sitting a platter in the bottom left corner...

brainchilds said on May. 26 '10

glad you like it! :)

brainchilds said on May. 26 '10

michaelspitz - No, there is not.I will change it :)
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michaelspitz said on May. 26 '10

^Looks good. To be honest I thought the platter might have been kind of clever... Especially given that it's a restaurant > Just a thought ;)
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emesghali said on May. 26 '10

the only thing that comes to mind is CLASSY! i love it. i just dont get why the ground kind of tapers up? is it suppose to be siting on a plate? i guess you could emphasis that a little. i would also bring the text a little higher. GREAT WORK!

jayden said on May. 26 '10

nice feel!
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michaelspitz said on May. 27 '10

Great! Happy you took a stab a the platter idea > it's pretty intriguing in my opinion... And it would definitely make a mean looking cake ;) Something about the platter doesn't seem quite right to me, maybe it's a bit too wide? I think your earlier 'ground' width was probably sufficient, and if you narrow it a bit it'll also match your shadow better. While I like the new rounded base, perhaps the 'plate' would work better with squarer edges / less perspective > Right now it looks a bit like half a circle with the back missing > probably because the perspective is a bit off between it and the building. Hope you don't mind the extended commentary > I guess I had something in mind when I suggested it... ;)

brainchilds said on May. 27 '10

Thx man, truly useful advices! its changed! :)
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michaelspitz said on May. 27 '10

^Nice! :)

brainchilds said on May. 27 '10

Kool! :)
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birofunk said on May. 27 '10

fantastic illustration & great idea to stick it on a platter. Also love your type treatment here.

brainchilds said on May. 27 '10

Great thx!
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dotted i said on May. 27 '10

This is a fantastic logo...both the mark and the typeface. I liked it the minute I saw it pop up. All the suggestions you've gotten and changes you've made all work perfectly. Congrats.
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emesghali said on May. 27 '10

i like the platter idea! great redo.

brainchilds said on May. 27 '10

Cool u liked it with new look!

onesummer said on May. 27 '10

great job! is it me or does the roof-line on the right portion look more jagged than the roof-line on the left portion?
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McGuire Design said on May. 27 '10

Very beautiful, nice illustration style.
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sainteve said on May. 28 '10

i like it. :)
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logomotive said on May. 28 '10

Mark is nice, type could use some work and if any of you cannot see that, well I guess art is in the eye of the beholder.
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OcularInk said on May. 28 '10

^ ^ The 'O', 'R' and 'E' especially. ;^)
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logomotive said on May. 28 '10

seriously,Not trying to be an ass or anything but this type needs some major work. Well IMO anyhow.

brainchilds said on May. 28 '10

You know, i am still mastering skill of making typography so if you logomotive have some advice tell me :) I will focus on that and make it better. Cya!
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logomotive said on May. 28 '10

Hey thanks for listening. I love to help:). I'm still mastering it myself. OK the.. I, compare that with the rest of the letters. See how it's so bold meeting horizontals and serifs?Really only fits in with the A here, The O seems a little odd in comparison, the R's lobe is too narrow and a very odd spacing left between R A E. This can be improved a lot be making your horizontals strokes Including the O ,..a little bit thicker to match the I and A here.Normally the A goes from thin to thick on stems. make sure all stems are the same width.
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nido said on May. 28 '10

yeah... Mike's mastering catching flies with chopsticks... the rest of us... wax on....
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logomotive said on May. 28 '10

danielson,.. caught 2 today.
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JF said on May. 28 '10

Yes, agree with logo motive on the type needing help. Also, text/type under the name is far too small, and will be virtually illegible at small sizes [on a business card, on envelopes, etc.]... I'm a fan of the 'shrink test'. If your logo is still readable/legible at an image width and height of 1", it's a success, visually speaking. Not including white space, that is. If it's longer in width rather than height, use that as your 1" measurement, same goes for height rather than width, if it's higher rather than wider. Hope that makes sense; it's late, and I may be rambling. Good luck with it!

brainchilds said on May. 29 '10

Ok, i have made it a little bit thicker as you can see ;)
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krinimal said on May. 29 '10

nice :)

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