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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- SkyCube
- by Raja
- Proposed identity for a new aerial property surveyor
- Number of views: 8337
- Dated Submitted: May. 10 '07
- Added to Gallery: May. 21 '07
May. 10 '07
kosta said:As usual, great work :)
At first, I thought 'why so literal the plane', but it seems to fit into the whole image well. Very nice.
May. 10 '07
bpotstra said:Maybe you should invert the blue and green colours on the cube to resemble earth (blue for sky, green for land) ...right now it looks like a plane flying over water with a green sky! :)
May. 10 '07
kaimere said:real nice dude :) weird if you write a comment and then rate the comment doesnt record ... but magic
May. 10 '07
OcularInk said:I will have to agree with bpotstra on the color swap. Otherwise, neat idea.
May. 11 '07
raja said:Thanks guys. The image is an aerial view of a plane flying over water and land. The sky would be above the plane.
dache, no. Skycube.
May. 11 '07
OcularInk said:raja said: Thanks guys. The image is an aerial view of a plane flying over water and land. The sky would be above the plane.
Even so, visually it would look better with green on bottom and it would still make sense. Also, with such a large mark and the bottom of the mark being blue, the type gets lost. Change it up, and the business name will feel a little more important. Haha, sky hexagon. There goes Dache trying to cause trouble. :-P
May. 11 '07
nido said:balle balle... actually i think its nice the way it is. just one question though, any reason why the right handside of the green isnt darkened?
May. 14 '07
senterbrands said:I think it is spot on the way it is. The shading gives the mark more depth. Leave it alone Raja. Nice.
May. 22 '07
mc said:good type, very nice combination and use of colors!
Jun. 10 '07
firebrand said:I like your thinking here, Raja.
Oct. 11 '07
koodoz said:I really like it. Great concept raja!
Although, I'm afraid I agree with everyone else... the colours should be swapped. This won't effect your rationale of sea/land and will make more sense to joe blo on the streets if they see it as land/sky.
One other thing I did notice, and it's probably just an optical illusion, but, at the bottom tip of the right wing, the blue blue edge seems to be slightly longer than that of the green edge. It's either that, or my eyes are crashing and burning on me.
Oct. 12 '07
raja said:you are right koodoz - its off by one pixel - something my other monitor did not pick up - but i see it now on this shiney new 24 inch iMac!
Oct. 12 '07
TernaciousT said:24 inch iMac....drool....I was looking at one yesterday....nice mark Raja.
Oct. 15 '07
koodoz said:I actually picked that up on my 15" powerbook. My eyes are not so bad after all :)
Nov. 16 '07
emesghali said:i like it, its clean.
Dec. 10 '07
Ez said:Raja, I think the niggle is the perspective, after reading everyone's comments... Have you drawn this as if from above? - bet this works fine on a sheet of paper lieing flat on a table? Here however the cube is seen on an upright screen, hence the comments to put the blue sky above the green land. Good design always makes sense.
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May. 10 '07
chappy said:wow!